Thorn and petal
the breath rises, falls--gasps!
second voice unfolds
--direct transcription of traditional Roni'ith song
Sharps and flats
The songs bends and twists
Tune the instrument
before the song begins
Change is the tuning-string before the performance
Between classes today, I've pruned certain elements from my story. The town of Naveyl is undergoing time alteration and Micah is experiencing incompatible memory disorder. With an open weekend ahead, I hope to clarify the situation by Monday.