Thursday, October 4, 2012

Four-Formed Note

Thorn and petal
the breath rises, falls--gasps!
second voice unfolds
now exhale
--direct transcription of traditional Roni'ith song

Sharps and flats
The songs bends and twists
Tune the instrument
before the song begins
--culturally-accurate translation

Change is the tuning-string before the performance
--Roni'ith proverb

Scribe's note
Between classes today,  I've pruned certain elements from my story. The town of Naveyl is undergoing time alteration and Micah is experiencing incompatible memory disorder. With an open weekend ahead, I hope to clarify the situation by Monday.

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